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'''Todd (VO): '''And it also doesn't put her out of her depth like the pride stuff in the middle.
 
'''Todd (VO): '''And it also doesn't put her out of her depth like the pride stuff in the middle.
   
'''Todd: '''It's just a weirdly unbalanced song all around. There's, like, a Goldilocks structure to it. ''[black screen with arrow pointing at "Mean Tweets"...] ''Like, too trivial... ''[..."Anti-Gay Bigotry"...] ''too serious...'' [...and "Sexist Forced Competition Between Women"] ''just right. Or close enough at least.
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'''Todd: '''It's just a weirdly unbalanced song all around. There's, like, a Goldilocks structure to it. ''[black screen with arrow pointing at "Mean Tweets"...] ''Like, too trvial... ''[..."Anti-Gay Bigotry"...] ''too serious...'' [...and "Sexist Forced Competition Between Women"] ''just right. Or close enough at least.
   
 
'''Todd (VO): '''Although actually, I think the song immediately gets better if they switched the second and third verses. ''[same chart with "Anti-Gay Bigotry" and "Sexist Forced Competition Between Women" switched around] ''Because then it would actually build, and get more serious, and then climax with a big, serious message.
 
'''Todd (VO): '''Although actually, I think the song immediately gets better if they switched the second and third verses. ''[same chart with "Anti-Gay Bigotry" and "Sexist Forced Competition Between Women" switched around] ''Because then it would actually build, and get more serious, and then climax with a big, serious message.
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