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Is It Right to Nitpick?

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NC (vo): It's not that a movie has mistakes, it's that it failed to ''distract'' us from those mistakes, with good characters, story and environment.
 
NC (vo): It's not that a movie has mistakes, it's that it failed to ''distract'' us from those mistakes, with good characters, story and environment.
   
''(Cut to footage of ''[[Iron Man 3 (Disneycember)|Iron Man 3]]'')''
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''(Cut to footage of an ''[[Iron Man 3 (Disneycember)|Iron Man 3]]'')''
   
 
NC (vo): Now, that doesn't mean, as long as you have those three elements, you never have to worry about mistakes. Film is still an illusion, and one that needs to hold the audience's attention for a while. The more plot holes or inconsistencies a film has, the more it has to try even harder to create engaging characters, environments and stories to distract you.
 
NC (vo): Now, that doesn't mean, as long as you have those three elements, you never have to worry about mistakes. Film is still an illusion, and one that needs to hold the audience's attention for a while. The more plot holes or inconsistencies a film has, the more it has to try even harder to create engaging characters, environments and stories to distract you.
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